Story ideas part two

Posted in fictional constructs by surgicalpotato on January 31, 2010

A HIV-positive boy has made a deal with the Devil (and not with his antipode, for reasons unknown) for one more night alive. He spends it on the boardwalk of a harbor overlooking the ocean, thinking about nothing in particular as his life force slowly melts into moths flying towards the rising sun.

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Sam said, on February 2, 2010 at 7:45 pm

Should it not be “An HIV…”? I actually don’t know.

In other news, I like this also!

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AARON TAYLOR said, on February 8, 2010 at 11:28 pm

OMG I CRIED SO HARD.
nah j/k
i touched myself a little while reading this

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AARON TAYLOR said, on February 8, 2010 at 11:30 pm

oh btw i found your website.
expect abusive comments on a daily basis.
ENJOY!
oh also i heard vimal convinced you that phil collins or somebody was in chinatown.
SILLY BOY, white people don’t go into 中国城

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